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Term papers: An outline
of my recommendations
Spring, 2001
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term paper should present a literature review and analysis
of a particular facet of the course’s major focus. Within
this context, the topic you write about is entirely up to
you and your team. In class you selected a topic that was
of particular interest to you; one that hopefully evokes
some passion; one that intrigues you so much that you forget
that you’re working on a term paper; one worthy of the time
and energy you're going to be devoting to the research and
writing required to make the paper of value to you now and
in the future; one that will teach me something new.
You should follow
certain writing conventions. First, your paper should
be well written. I have delineated what I mean by well
written in the first section of this paper. Second, I
would like you to follow the technical writing format
described in the second section of this paper. Technical
writers have developed a plethora of tricks to make writing
simple and reading easy. Outlined in the second
section of this paper are some of these tricks. Third,
please use APA
style for your references. This style is described
in various writing style manuals that you should own by
now, if not you can either acquire one from the book store
or use one in the Writing Center. Feel free to use the
Writing Center consultants or trusted friends to help
you with your writing. Your editors should stick to grammatical
errors and issues related to style. The ideas presented
should be yours and yours alone.
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and Focused Writing
The following list
of "Criteria of Good Writing" was developed by Mary Washington
Faculty (Drs. Bill, Ferrell, Huller, Hanna, Manning, &
Wishner) at a Writing Intensive Retreat a couple of years
ago. These criteria make good sense and I hope that they
prove useful to you.
1) Adherence
to the assigned task.
2) Clear, sufficient,
but limited purpose
3) Solid development
of the paper's purpose or thesis, with relevant and
ample supporting details.
4) Freshness of
thought
5) Focus (no wandering
from the papers purpose or thesis)
6) Organization
suitable to the task
7) Straightforward,
clear style.
8) Standard use
of language, punctuation, etc.
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personal idiosyncrasies Here are a few
nits that I pick. For example, paragraphs should contain
only one idea. For this reason, paragraphs of not more than
four to six sentences should be the norm. Of course there
are times that a paragraph has to be longer, but make sure
that longer paragraphs really do present only one idea.
Often long paragraphs can be broken into two or more paragraphs.
Most of the time,
you will not use the word "this" without an immediate
referent, i.e. instead of writing "from this I conclude"
you would write "from this approach I conclude," or "from
this research I conclude," or "from this theory I conclude."
While it may be possible to effectively use "this" to
refer to something presented earlier in a sentence or
in a paragraph, often there are more than one possible
referents that the "this" might imply. If you are going
to use "this" without an immediate referent, please make
sure that there is only one referent for the "this". If
you are not sure, play it safe and use a referent.
Please use nonsexist
pronouns. In other words, use he/she or her/his, instead
of he or his. If the gender of the person you are referring
to is obvious, then of course you should use the appropriate
gender pronoun.
Please do not use
plastic report covers. A cover page and a staple on the
top left corner will suffice. This approach makes managing
a large quantity of papers easier.
Finally, papers should
be typed and double-spaced. The double spacing gives more
room to write editorial comments.
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The format that I
expect is a typical technical writing format. This approach
includes an introduction to the topic and to the paper
itself, breaks the paper up into sections and subsections,
uses headings and subheadings to highlight key areas,
and uses a summary/conclusion section to tie the sections
together. Tables and graphs may be incorporated to expedite
presentation of lists and to present data. In the rest
of this section, the format is described in more detail.
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Introductions
An introduction to a term paper should do at least four
things in sequence. First, it should introduce the reader
to the topic or thesis of the paper. The writer should
not assume that the audience has previous knowledge of
the topic. Therefore, present salient definitions regarding
the topic early. Specifically, present a brief description
of the topic area and relevant definitions in the opening
paragraphs. References should be used to illustrate that
the definitions and/or descriptions presented are ones
commonly accepted by the researchers/writers in the particular
field of study.
Second, some where
in the introduction the writer should present specific
studies (study results, theories or models) that are relevant
to the thesis -- again, use references to document the
information you present. If the writer is particularly
skilled, entwining the specific studies with the definitions/descriptions
noted above will enhance the paper. The specific studies
presented should set the stage for a discussion of the
problems your paper will explore or the thesis you intend
to present.
Third, in the introduction,
the writer should not talk about solutions nor draw conclusions
regarding the thesis or "problem". A simple statement
of the thesis or evident problem is sufficient. At this
early point in the paper the purpose is to inform the
reader of the situation, i.e. presenting the "symptoms,"
not a "diagnosis," a proposed "treatment," nor a probable
"prognosis." To quote Dragnet's Sergeant Joe Friday: "All
we're interested in are the facts." Also, it is best to
save the brilliant but subtle insights to present in the
body of the paper, where there is more room to effectively
explain them and to provide supporting evidence.
Fourth, you want
to entice the reader by telling them why exploration of
this topic could prove beneficial. To accomplish this
task the writer should present the specific thesis or
problems explored in the paper. The final facet of the
introduction should introduce the reader to the paper.
The writer should tell the reader what to expect in the
rest of the paper. Three of the questions the reader should
expect to have answered in this section of the introduction
include:
1) What
is the purpose of the current paper?
2) How is it organized?
3) If the reader
continues to read this document what will be presented?
Finally, the last
sentence of the introduction should provide an easy transition
to the first section of the paper.
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Sections and
Subsections
Papers
are easier to read and understand if you break them into
manageable chunks, i.e. sections and subsections. Just
as a paragraph should contain one and only one idea, a
section should contain one particular facet of the topic
you are exploring. In this paper, the variety of topics
related to paper format are encapsulated in a section
on format and the section on "Format" into subsections
on "Introductions," "Sections and Subsections", "Headings
and Subheadings", "Summary and/or Conclusions" and "Tables,
Graphs and Lists". Note that in the paragraph introducing
this section I told you (the reader) that these were the
topics would be presented.
Within
the paper, organize sections in such a way that the reader
is building understanding of the area as he/she reads.
Often, it is easiest to organize your sections by how
much you have to say about a given topic. Typically, the
more you have to say about a given facet of your topic
the more important that particular facet is to your presentation
of the topic. Sometimes, however, the various facets of
a topic have a "built-in" order, i.e. it is impossible
to write about "B" until you have effectively explained
"A". In these cases, even if you have a lot more to say
about "B" than "A", "A" must come first.
Sections,
themselves, are easier to read if you further organize
them into subsections. As I noted earlier, tackling a
topic by breaking it into "digestible" bits greatly facilitates
the ease with which a reader can assimilate the logic
and structure of the your paper. In particularly long
sections, like this one, an introductory paragraph that
introduces the reader to the section may be useful.
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Headings
and Subheadings Headings
and subheadings, using underlined (or "bolded") titles,
to introduce a section and indented titles like this one
to introduce subsections, help the reader understand the
way you have structured the paper and to organize the
material in the way you intended. Headings and subheadings
also make it easier to keep track of where the reader
is in the paper and to return to a particular section
or subsection if (when!) interrupted. Thinking about the
reader's task and making your paper "user-friendly" can
go a long way to increasing the accessibility of your
logic and understanding of your thesis. Headings and subheading
are like menus and sub-menus in a computer program, they
make the users/readers work easier. Sub-subheadings may
occasionally be appropriate. Table one illustrates two
approaches to the use of multiple levels of headings,
subheadings and sub-subheadings that you may find helpful
as you write your term paper. You may use either approach
or one of your own. If you develop your own make sure
it is consistent throughout your paper.
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Summary and/or
Conclusions
The final section of your paper will be your reference
section. However, the final part of the body of your paper
should be either a summary section, where you highlight
the key points of the entire paper, or a conclusion section
where you present to the readers your conclusions. A "Summary
and Conclusions" section is also an alternative. Here
you start by highlighting key points from the various
sections, draw them together if appropriate and then present
to the reader your conclusions or "what next" proposals.
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Tables, Figures
and Lists
Tables,
figures, and lists are particularly useful when attempting
to present a lot of detailed information, to illustrate
data, to graphically portray a relationship between variables,
to graphically present a conceptual model, or to summarize
key points. Table one is an example of the use of a table
to present essential points discussed else where in the
paper. Figure 1 is a graphic displaying the outline of
this document. Illustrated earlier in this document are
two approaches to lists.
There
are a number of different rules regarding Tables and Figures
and these rules vary a little bit from one style to another.
I am not going to be a stickler on the format you use
for Tables and Figures for this paper, but I would recommend
that you use either APA or MLA style just for the practice.
However, please try to integrate the tables and figures
in the body of the paper, instead of attaching them to
the back.
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| Summary
and Conclusions
I have tried to highlight most of the important points
I can think of regarding my term paper assignment. Stated
briefly:
1) In introductions:
Tell'm what you're goin' to tell'm! And how you
will structure the tale!
2) In the body
of the paper: Tell'm in as clear, and straight forward
a way as possible! Be Consistent in style and
use sections and subsections with clear headings and
subheadings.
3) In the summary/conclusion
section: Tell'm you told'm! Reiterate key points
and themes, identify weaknesses and future directions.
Good luck on the assignment
and please feel free to ask questions!!
Click
here if you find writing harder than calculus!
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Table one:
Two approaches
to managing
headings, subheadings
and sub-subheadings
Approach one
Paper titles should be centered and underlined
Introduction starts below the title as in this paper.
Section headings
Section titles are underlined and set one line above
the first line of the opening paragraph.
Subsection headings Subsection
headings are indented, underlined, and then separated
from the first sentence by a set amount of space. The
amount of space may vary from paper to paper but should
be consistent within the paper.
• Sub-sub section headings - are often not set apart
from the sentence they precede. There is a variety of
approaches to sub-subsection headings. The "bullet"
approach I've used here is common in industry, but very
uncommon in journal articles.
Approach two
PAPER TITLES ARE DONE IN
ALL CAPITAL LETTERS AND NOT UNDERLINED
Introduction starts below the title and describes why
the topic is important, as well as the outline of the
paper.
Section headings
Section headings are underlined and set two lines
above the first line of the opening paragraph and
three lines below the last sentence of the last paragraph.
Subsection headings
Subsection headings are underlined and set one line
above the first line of the opening paragraph, and two
lines below last paragraph.
Sub-sub section headings
Subsection headings are indented and underlined and
then separated from the first sentence by a set amount
of space. The amount of space may vary from paper to
paper, but it should be consistent within the paper.
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Figure one:
An outline of
a term paper
Cover Page
Title
Name
Organizational
Affiliation
Date
Introduction
Topic
Importance
Key issues
Any Definitions
Thesis or primary
focus
Structure or Organization
of the rest of the paper
Section One:
First paragraph
is an intro to topic & structure of section
Subsections
Brief Summary
Transition to next
section
Sections Two through N
Same as section
1
Summary and/or Conclusions
Reiterate key points
Tie sections together
Note any problems
identified in the main body of the text.
Make recommendations
or suggest future research directions
References
Appendices
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